Commonwealth Short Story Prize こもんうぇるすたんぺんしょうせつしょう
第2回(2013年)
受賞者
5名Set in a tired little bar on the edge of town, this short story moves under the watchful sense of the other customers’ eyes and ears. Its uneasy atmosphere and sharp observation gradually raise the tension in the room.
Behind the bar’s quiet, the pressure of watching eyes thickens.
Set in an old house after a long dry spell, the story lets the smell of rain unlock a buried memory. The present-tense scene and the remembered past gradually overlap, revealing the story’s quiet tension between hope and loss.
The smell of rain opens a door to a memory that has been shut for years.
A brother and sister train side by side for a race, then a loss sends them onto different paths. Set against northern landscapes and bodily exertion, the story quietly brings forward the distance that can open inside intimacy.
Running does not draw them closer; it reveals the shape of their separation.
Against the social tensions of Trinidad, the story brings loss, violence and family secrecy into view with a restrained voice. It lets unease surface inside everyday life, alongside the sense of a place marked by history and community.
Beneath the quiet of daily life, what has been lost and concealed slowly comes into view.
Childhood sensations and family memory rise gradually alongside animal imagery. As the boundary between reality and unreality shifts, the story searches for forms of comfort and affection.
Even when memory is fragmented, the feelings that emerge from it remain vivid.